super paper mario review

[mario and pokemon fan]

this is my first review its pretty short

whole review
the game has many chapters you can play in 2D and swich to 3D.Many bad guys to beat and bosses which are pretty hard later in the game.This is a mind bending game you must try anything you got so far to get farther in the game.You can be mario,luigi,peach and even bowser plus help of some pixels you wont get really far with out them.any ways this game is full of puzzles you have to think through players might enjoy this game if there looking for some 2D and 3D action.The main goel is to get pure hearts which are in the end of a chapter but you must defeat a boss.

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gamplay 9/10 its really fun
difficulty 10/10 need to think things through
sound 8/10 music is awsome

[cheat-master30]

My comments on your review are that:

1. It's very short, and lacks paragraph/sentence flow.

2. Spelling and grammar needs improvement

Nicely formatted though in terms of style, and it's accurate (which is more than can be said for some 'professional reviews')

[mario and pokemon fan]

its just a mini review and thanks:)

[Goomba Smackdown!!]

Wasn't so much as a review as an advertisment. No soul, no feeling.

Note, I am not trying to be mean, just giving you tips on what to improve on in later reviews.

[cheat-master30]

Ironically, you could say that about many newspaper game reviews Goomba Smackdown!!, this is actually far longer than them.

[Mr.M]

Nice review!