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Symerwizkid22
3rd December 2007, 11:50 PM
This a comic that I do every now and then. There is no story, and every comic is unique. I am not good at sprite comics, so I'm sorry, but don't flame. If you have any ideas for a comic, please either PM them to me, or leave me a Profile Comment. I need all the ideas I can get!
Thanks to everyone who helped me learn all about sprite comics,
~SWK22
The Comics
Randomocity 1 (http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5633/comic1qd6.png)
Symerwizkid22
3rd December 2007, 11:51 PM
First comic:
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5633/comic1qd6.png
elvis1835
4th December 2007, 12:59 AM
mind some critisism? if so it's only minor
Symerwizkid22
4th December 2007, 01:42 AM
I always like critisizm.
elvis1835
4th December 2007, 01:58 AM
okay the ground could use some erm work it is really choppy
Symerwizkid22
4th December 2007, 02:16 AM
Yeah in tiles 3-6 they are off, but by the time I realized they were off, I couldn't fix them without going back and redoing half the comic.
elvis1835
4th December 2007, 08:31 AM
ah. That makes more sense i make occasional comics for sonic the plumber (soopahsonic's site) so i'm used to them.
cheat-master30
4th December 2007, 09:59 AM
It's great in terms of 'production value', as in graphics and the like, but I don't get the jokes.
NintenDan
4th December 2007, 11:12 AM
You mean, 'joke', right? HA HA HA HA HA!!!!! Did you get that one?!?! Oh, I now a handy tip on how to get the tiles perfecto on two back to back panels like yours.
Symerwizkid22
4th December 2007, 12:15 PM
It's great in terms of 'production value', as in graphics and the like, but I don't get the jokes.
Have you never played Ocarina of Time and wanted to just keep going, but then Navi keeps bugging you? Well, that's the main gist of this one. Just read it again and set yourself in the time of Ocarina of Time.
cheat-master30
7th December 2007, 12:12 PM
I get that, but it's very much less of a dramatic response to the fairy's annoyingness than expected...
Symerwizkid22
7th December 2007, 08:10 PM
I know, it was my first sprite comic, and I suck at them. Now that I have all the basics down and know what I'm doing from first person experience I will be able to take more time on the actual dialouge.
cheat-master30
7th December 2007, 11:43 PM
So, any ideas on making some more?
Symerwizkid22
8th December 2007, 02:04 AM
Well, that's just the thing! I need some ideas. If anyone has any ideas, then let me know. It would be very much appreciated.
cheat-master30
8th December 2007, 12:59 PM
Sadly I'm kind of out of ideas.
Symerwizkid22
8th December 2007, 01:28 PM
I'll think of something, don't you worry.
cheat-master30
9th December 2007, 12:49 PM
You have plenty of possibilities. Maybe the logical flaws in Legend of Zelda like breaking into houses and stealing money from pots? Or how you can only walk in non diagonal directions in Pokemon?
Symerwizkid22
9th December 2007, 01:17 PM
I like the Zelda one, but that would be pretty alien to me... making a comic from the overhead view. I think I might try though! I just need to see if there are the appropriate sprites to accommodate.
cheat-master30
27th January 2008, 05:19 PM
I wonder, what actually happened to this?
NintenDan
28th January 2008, 06:43 AM
Yes... what did happen...?
Symerwizkid22
29th January 2008, 08:56 PM
I'm busy now...
cheat-master30
29th January 2008, 09:17 PM
Will these ever continue?
Symerwizkid22
29th January 2008, 11:59 PM
No clue...
NintenDan
30th January 2008, 09:48 AM
Eh, it's okay. You were a newcomer to comics, so it's easily forgiven. Now, about that Amazing Race comic, where's that? Abandoned as well I suppose.
Symerwizkid22
30th January 2008, 10:12 PM
Yeah, and who was writing that anyway?
NintenDan
1st February 2008, 02:23 AM
I forget...
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