Kirby Teaser Comic

[GenericMan121]

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q224/GenericMan121/KirbyTeasercomic.jpg

Ooh, what will happen next? Tune in next week for this amazing Cliffhangers conclusion.

[conicsonic5]

Nice job.

Just a tiny bit short...

[GenericMan121]

It's just a teaser. They'll be longer ones later on.

But, thanks.

[cheat-master30]

Two things:


Too short/plain
Needs better backgrounds, either handrawn or these type sprites (http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/kirby/).

[GenericMan121]

1.It was a teaser, it's meant to be short!!!!


2. Yes I'll use better backgrounds don't worry.

[cheat-master30]

That's good, as I hate bland looking default Paint backgrounds. Oh, and if I can add these to the main site Generic? Can I?

[GenericMan121]

Sure. Knock yourself out.

[cheat-master30]

Okay, I will.

[GenericMan121]

Ok, next comic will be longer and will have a better background.

[cheat-master30]

Okay. And will these have an actual story?

[GenericMan121]

Maybe.....

[cheat-master30]

Is that a yes or a no?

[GenericMan121]

It's a probably.

[cheat-master30]

Oh, okay. So likely to have a story then?

[GenericMan121]

Yep........

[cheat-master30]

Oh, okay then. Hope it's good...

[GenericMan121]

I hopes so too. (My confidence isn't high at comic making)

[cheat-master30]

Just chill out, and don't worry about it. Try your best I guess.

[GenericMan121]

Meh, if they're bad I'll just stop. Or keep going to annoy my critics. :D

[cheat-master30]

Poor critics...

[GenericMan121]

Critics are poor because they made crappy life choices and don't get paid for their bad opinions.

[cheat-master30]

LOL. Critics for the loss, total skeptics forever!

[GenericMan121]

That's why I think skitzofrenics (spell?) would make great critics. i mean they hear voices, why not write down what the voices say about what they're critisizing.

[cheat-master30]

LOL. That would be quite disturbing...

[GenericMan121]

But quite amusing.

[cheat-master30]

Agreed by far, especially on those lame contest shows.

[GenericMan121]

Lol.........

[cheat-master30]

Either way, next issue!

[GenericMan121]

It'll come soon.

[cheat-master30]

Oh, awesome then.

[NintenDan]

And NintenDan waits eagerly... so very eagerly...

[GenericMan121]

A new one tonight if I'm on my Computer.

BTW it's my tonight which is about 3 1/2 hours from now.

[cheat-master30]

Oh, okay. And cool, if it is better than those which have come previous.

[NintenDan]

His first comic? I thought It was kind of funny.

[GenericMan121]

If you know who pikachu936 (GFAQs) is, it is quite humourous.

[GenericMan121]

BTW, second longer comic is in production. ^_^

[NintenDan]

Good to hear! I cannot wait to read it! Also, have you by any chance read my "Mario's Western Land" comics, as I think not too many people are reading them, which dissapoints me, because I'm putting effort into a comic that may not be enjoyed...

[GenericMan121]

Yeah I have, ironically it was while you were posting that.

[cheat-master30]

Post the next comic already!

[GenericMan121]

It's still in production.

[cheat-master30]

Oh, okay then.

[NintenDan]

The Kirby and the not so amazing Mirror! Is that the one that was under production?

[cheat-master30]

Most likely.

[momo lad]

lol cool!!